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Apr 16, 2019 20:26:00

afternoon on the veranda... (Alice, no Bob)

by @lucjah PATRON | 200 words | 33🔥 | 389💌


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"What would you feel like doing this lovely afternoon? The weather is beautiful. Alice went for a walk with Veri, we could go absolutely wild!"

"Well... I was just considering options... But Ty, I must admit I am rather TyRed after yesterday...'

"Yes, true. I feel quite exhausted myself. But... what was it that we were actually doing yesterday? My memory is not as good as it used to be."

"We were sleeping on the veranda."

"Oh yeees... of course... Spring Sun is so exhausting, isn't it? But it must be age as well. We are not like we used to be... oh boooy... Do you remember last August...."

"Of course I do! (Do I...?)"

"So maybe something less challenging today... What would you say about napping in the kitchen?"

"Sounds just perfect. And we might catch a glimpse of Ginger in the neighbours' garden..."

"O?! I can hear steps. They are coming back... So soon?! We better go somewhere quiet!"

"I saw Alice taking two marvellous salat bowls to the cellar yesterday. They will be heavenly for a warm day like today. Meow..."

"Here we are! Shall we have something to eat boys?! Veeeeeri! Ty!! Red!!! Supper!!!!!!!!!"

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    @lucjah I have some doubts now regarding the nature of those three guys... First I thought they were cats, but now I see them more as cute ghosts.. <3

    PhilH avatar PhilH | Apr 18, 2019 00:22:19
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      @philh but why???? Why ghosts? Why cute???
      I mean, of course only Ty and Red are cats! Veri is a dog for fucks sake! You hardly ever go for a walk with a cat....

      Lucjah avatar Lucjah | Apr 18, 2019 00:27:02
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      @lucjah ah!! but once you think it's a cat, it's easy to accept the idea that he went for a walk.. I never questioned that! Actually, you know at least one cat who likes walks (ok, walks with the dog, but still)

      PhilH avatar PhilH | Apr 18, 2019 00:34:01
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    @philh , of course you read, and commented, just not here :-)

    Lucjah avatar Lucjah | Apr 17, 2019 20:43:37
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    @lucjah - Perfect 200 words - 3 in a row!!
    This makes my OCD happy.

    Keep writing #TeamStreak #Team100 #TeamJust200words.

    Keni avatar Keni | Apr 16, 2019 15:34:36
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      @keni LOL, Im so happy you noticed
      it takes a bit of extra work... to add something here, to cut out something there, but recently I feel like I can at least try to say whatever I want to say in exactly the 200
      (and for me it looks good on the feed :D it's "clean", right?! :-)))
      Well, of course sometimes the need to express something particular is more important...
      #TeamJust200words hihihi... YES!!!

      Lucjah avatar Lucjah | Apr 16, 2019 21:42:59
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